Essay: Opinionated (Part 1 Question 1)

B2 - C1 WRITING

5/11/2026

TASK EXAMPLE

Your class has attended a panel discussion on the impact of technology in education. You have made the notes below:

  • technology makes lessons more interactive

  • students can become too dependent on devices

  • (C1) online materials are easier to access than printed books/ (B2) Your own idea...

Some opinions expressed in the discussion:

“Technology helps students stay motivated.”

“Too much screen time affects concentration.”

Write an essay discussing two of the points in your notes (C1). You should explain which point is more important, giving reasons to support your opinion.

Write your answer in 140 - 190 (B2)/220–260 (C1) words.

PLANNING

Keywords:
  • technology

  • interactive lessons

  • dependent on devices

  • online materials

  • motivation

  • screen time

  • concentration

  • education

  • digital learning

  • independent learning

Good Grammar and Use of English Structures:
  • Giving opinions - In my opinion... / I firmly believe that...

  • Contrast and concession - Although technology offers many benefits... / While some people argue that...

  • Complex sentences - Students are able to access information more quickly because resources are available online

  • Passive voice - Lessons can be made more engaging through technology

  • Modal verbs - Schools should encourage responsible use of digital devices

  • Formal essay structures - One major advantage is that... / Another issue worth considering is...

  • Advanced expressions - It is often argued that... / There is no doubt that...

Cohesive Devices and Connectors:
  • (To begin with,)

  • (Moreover,)

  • (On the other hand,)

  • (Nevertheless,)

  • (As a result,)

  • (In addition,)

  • (In conclusion,)

  • although

  • because

  • however

  • therefore

ESSAY

The Role of Technology in Education

Technology has become an essential part of modern education, and its influence continues to grow every year. While some people believe that students are becoming too dependent on digital devices, I firmly believe that technology has improved education in several important ways.

(To begin with,) technology makes lessons far more interactive and engaging. Teachers are able to use videos, online quizzes and digital presentations to create more dynamic classes. As a result, students are often more motivated and involved in the learning process than they would be with traditional teaching methods alone.

(Moreover,) online materials are much easier to access than printed books. Students can research information instantly, complete assignments online and study independently from almost any location. This flexibility is especially useful for learners who may need additional support or prefer studying at their own pace.

(On the other hand,) some people argue that students rely too heavily on technology and spend too much time looking at screens. Although this is a valid concern, I believe the solution is to teach responsible use of technology rather than avoid it completely. Schools should encourage balance and ensure that digital tools are used effectively.

(In conclusion,) technology has transformed education positively because it provides students with greater access to information and creates more engaging learning experiences.